begin page 79 | back to top


William Blake, Oeuvres IV: Vala ou les Quatre Vivants, et Annotations à divers ouvrages. Texte original présenté, traduit et annoté par Jacques Blondel. Paris: Aubier-Flammarion, 1983.

Despite the modest self-appraisal implicit in Jacques Blondel’s remark that “Une traduction des Livres prophétiques de Blake peut faire penser à une tapisserie sans les couleurs” (48), his rendering of The Four Zoas—the first ever into French—is rich in color, a superb achievement. Of course the original rhythm (“le septénaire iambique et plus souvent anapestique” [50]) cannot be conveyed in a non-accentual language. Nor can long sequences of marching adjectives be rendered in analogous processions: “Hearing the march of long resounding, strong heroic Verse” becomes “Entendant le progrès du puissant Vers heroïque aux échos prolongés” (61). Blondel alters the rhythm, the placement of words, and sometimes even the logic of their interrelations because the French language requires these changes. “Long” has to refer to the resonance, the resounding, rather than to the verse itself, though in Blake’s line it can refer to both. Certain fruitful ambiguities must be sacrificed to clarity. But not all. For instance, “Mighty was the draught of Voidness to draw Existence in” becomes “Le souffle du Vide était puissant pour aspirer l’Existence” (115). Here the punning play on “draught” and “draw” (and their alliteration, too) finds a perfect counterpart in the pairing of “souffle” and “aspirer.” There are even bonuses. When “rav’ning like the hungry worm” becomes “vorace comme le ver avide” (115) we feel we have received an extra gift of evocative music.

A six-part introduction offers useful background to the new reader of Blake’s epic. In “Révolution et révélation” Newton and Milton offer earlier precedents for Blake’s insistence on the primacy of apocalyptic vision. In “Millénarisme et mysticisme” specimens of revolutionary-minded apocalypticism from Southey’s Joan of Arc and Coleridge’s Religious Musings enrich the context. As Blake is shown interiorizing his revolutionary hopes, parallels with Winstanley are drawn: Blake is presented as seer rather than mystic (“voyant” vs. “mystique”). “Le mythe des Quatre Vivants” makes the point that the Zoas “sont des personnifications, des états d’âme, et non des vertus et des vices, comme dans une allégorie médiévale” (27). (“Vivants” is a wonderful rendering of “Zoas,” in my opinion, especially for the new reader of Blake; it clears up the line “We are become a Victim to the Living”—“Nous voilà devenus Victime des Vivants” [63]—in a way that is very helpful right at the outset. Blake’s later explanation, “they are named Life’s—in Eternity” is rendered by Blondel as “elles ont nom les merveilles de la Vie—dans l’Éternité” [425].) The section “Les nuits” sums up the plot and, borrowing a fine phrase used in another context by Gérard Genette (Figures I, 1966), characterizes The Four Zoas as “pourvu d’un surplus de sens inépuisable et toujours indéfiniment présent” (40). “Du chaos à la pastorale” relates Blake’s pictorial art to Fuseli, Tibaldi, Barry, Flaxman, and Stothard. Blake’s vivid baroque is encapsulated in Bachelard’s aphorism that all three Blakean epics are “litanies de l’énergie qui sont comme des interjections qui pensent” (47). Finally, “Le langage symbolique” summarizes Josephine Miles’ groupings of Blakean rhetorical figures and modes of diction.

Wonderfully Blakean is the epigraph from Saint-John Perse that heads up the Introduction; in part it says, “De l’exigence poétique, exigence spirituelle, sont nées les religions elles-mêmes, et par la grâce poétique, l’étincelle du divin vit à jamais dans le silex humain” (7). Study of the “spark” image in the poem itself shows Blondel’s refusal to be bound by any strict literalism, his openness to context in modifying diction. “Los answer’d in his furious pride, sparks issuing from his hair” becomes “Los, superbe et furieux, répondit, les cheveux pleins d’étincelles” (179). The French Los has hair “filled” with sparks to match the fullness of his pride. The element of motion in “issuing” is omitted. But one page later, the sparks return, and this time they show twice as much motion in French as in English, to dramatize Los’ redoubled fury as the translator wants us to feel it. Thus, “In scorn stood Los, red sparks of blighting from his furious head / Flew over the waves of Tharmas” now becomes “Méprisant se dressait Los, et de rouges étincelles dévastatrices jaillissant de sa tête furieuse / Volèrent au-dessus des vagues de Tharmas” (181). Here “sparks of blighting” are “étincelles dévastatrices” (superb majesty of destructive indignation!). But just a bit later, “From his mouth curses, and from his eyes sparks of blighting” becomes “De sa bouche sortaient des malédictions, et de ses yeux de funestes étincelles” (207). These new “sparks of blighting” are merely “funestes étincelles”; fatal, funereal, they make us think of a pyre, not a lightning blast from heaven. Moods change, and the translator responds.

begin page 80 | back to top

The poem’s very last line offers another fine instance of precision and care combined with vividness and force. For “The dark Religions are departed and sweet Science reigns” Blondel gives us “Les sombres Religions ne sont plus, et du Savoir délectable c’est maintenant le règne” (483). Here he tries to reproduce the cadence, the rhythm, and he does it so well that we do not feel the syntactic inversion as at all forced. “C’est maintenant le règne du Savoir délectable” would be quite inappropriate, for we wish to end with a sense of innocence re-organized, of organic form, of a rule which is not Urizen’s dividing rule. The translator, incidentally, as word-connoisseur has done as much careful thinking about the word “sweet” in Blakean usage as he has devoted to the imagery of sparks and blighting. In the Introduction he contrasts Blake’s “sweet Science” with the Shelleyan “sweet eclipse / When soul meets soul on lovers’ lips” (45) to help illustrate the difference between the more earthly apocalypse of the Zoas and the ethereal one of Prometheus Unbound Act IV. “Sweet,” in Blake, also proves quite variable in meaning according to context. “Redd’ning, the demon strong prepar’d the poison of sweet Love” becomes “Rougissant, le puissant démon prépara le poison de l’amour souriant” (285). This is translation as interpretation, and it deserves high praise.

One can always cavil about a few details. I don’t know why “all the black mould sings” should be weakened to “toute la terre noire chante” (457). “Mould” here refers to the rich, friable, black topsoil; why not “l’humus noir” instead of “la terre noire”? And surely it is more than a cavil to suggest that the Erdman text should have been used, not the Keynes.

But overall, the version is excellent. I cannot resist citing still another instance of taste and discernment. “Fearing thy frown, loving thy smile, O Urizen, Prince of Light” becomes “Redoutant le courroux de ton front et aimant ton sourire, O Urizen, Prince de Lumière” (411). “Le courroux de ton front” was by no means the inevitable choice for “frown”; there are many possibilities—“renfrognement,” or “froncement de sourcil,” or “regard courroucé.” But the mention of Urizen’s “forehead” is perfect in a picture of this Zoa of the head, or Schoolmaster of the Sky—and “front” even sounds like “frown.” The whole Quatre Vivants abounds in exquisite touches of this kind. The notes to Watson, Bacon, and Boyd included in the same volume are also finely done into French. And the sample sketches reproduced from the Zoas manuscript increase our pleasure.

A total of six volumes is envisioned for this bilingual Blake series, which is under the direction of Pierre Leyris.

Print Edition

  • Publisher
  • Department of English, University of Rochester
  • Rochester, NY, USA
    • Editors
    • Morris Eaves
    • Morton D. Paley
    • Manging Editor
    • Patricia Neill
    • Bibliographer
    • Detlef W. Dörrbecker
    • Review Editor
    • Nelson Hilton
    • Associate Editor for Great Britain
    • David Worrall
    • Contributors
    • Rodney M. Baine
    • Martin Bidney
    • Martin Butlin
    • V.A. De Luca
    • Alexander S. Gourlay
    • Michael Grenfell
    • Desmond King-Hele
    • Paul Mann
    • Anne K. Mellor
    • Dena Bain Taylor
    • Joseph Viscomi
    • David Worrall

    Digital Edition

    • Editors:
    • Morris Eaves, University of Rochester
    • Robert Essick, University of California, Riverside
    • Joseph Viscomi, University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill
    • Project Manager
    • Joe Fletcher
    • Technical Editor
    • Michael Fox
    • Previous Project Manager and Technical Editor
    • William Shaw
    • Project Director
    • Adam McCune
    • Project Coordinator, UNC:
    • Natasha Smith, Carolina Digital Library and Archives
    • Project Coordinator, University of Rochester:
    • Sarah Jones
    • Scanning:
    • UNC Digital Production Center
    • XML Encoding:
    • Apex CoVantage
    • Additional Transcription:
    • Adam McCune
    • Jennifer Park
    • Emendations:
    • Rachael Isom
    • Mary Learner
    • Adam McCune
    • Ashley Reed
    • Jennifer Park
    • Scott Robinson
    • XSLT Development:
    • Adam McCune
    • Joseph Ryan
    • William Shaw
    • PHP and Solr Development:
    • Michael Fox
    • Adam McCune
    • Project Assistants:
    • Lauren Cameron,
    • Rachael Isom,
    • Mary Learner,
    • Jennifer Park,
    • Ashley Reed,
    • Adair Rispoli,
    • Scott Robinson
    • Sponsors
    • Funders
    • Blake/An Illustrated Quarterly
    • William Blake Archive
    • Carolina Digital Library and Archives
    • Use Restrictions
    • Copyright © 2015 Blake/An Illustrated Quarterly, all rights reserved. Items in this digital edition may be shared in accordance with the Fair Use provisions of U.S. copyright law. Redistribution or republication on other terms, in any medium, requires express written consent from the editors and advance notification of the publisher. Permission to reproduce the graphic images in this digital edition rests with the owning institutions.